Just when you thought you were done...

Ugh.
The Trials! The Tribulations! The...Tie Fighters??

Okay, I ran out of T-words, but you get the point.

"Finished" the last chapters yesterday (and a bit more fiddling today)...but now I'm not happy. .
It seems too long, too complicated, too wordy, too MUCH! Argh!!

BUT! I believe I do have a solution, which will most likely shave off tons of wordage and a bunch o' chapters, and some of that extra plotty stuff that's gumming up the works. Lots of rewriting up ahead again.

That's the plan anyways.

Although I'm thinking of still handing it over to Anita to see what her initial reactions are (if she has time...and actually with the holidays just around the corner, it might just be more polite to let her read it in the New Year...)

Okay, back at it.

Lots of Christmas cheer to enjoy this week, in any case. Last Saturday was the 3rd annual Brendon and Fran Christmas Party (or as everyone likes to tumble their tongues over: Bran and Frendon). Today is the WAC christmas open house, and then the Prairie Fire christmas dinner for the Board of Directors (at the East India Palace - yumm!). And then tomorrow is the MAC christmas open house. And then Friday I'll be sampling Dim Sum with the Prairie Fire staff, and friends (Anita and Ariel). Fun and yummy week!